tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3204443645684988672.post475469246421786509..comments2023-05-25T00:32:25.387-07:00Comments on The English Department: 5 Easy Steps For Making Marshmallow TaffyDaniel Pereirahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12152850156750147460noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3204443645684988672.post-55173399678646092472012-01-12T21:12:19.152-08:002012-01-12T21:12:19.152-08:00I enjoyed this experiment. It was fun to do it and...I enjoyed this experiment. It was fun to do it and it was also fun to see other people trying to do it. For me the best part was probably the sticky fingers, jajajaja. Well I really liked this, and I wish we have more of this kinds of experiments in school.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3204443645684988672.post-56475685318014827222012-01-11T10:31:19.459-08:002012-01-11T10:31:19.459-08:00you could explain what was the purpose of the fina...you could explain what was the purpose of the final products, but I got confused and lost in some parts. Specially in the part were you say that the fingers should be 180 degrees apart from each other. I'm sure that there are many people that wouldn't be able to understand some things.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3204443645684988672.post-12928059636071009512012-01-10T07:08:21.812-08:002012-01-10T07:08:21.812-08:00Well, I got confused. I ended up doing the same t...Well, I got confused. I ended up doing the same thing that happened to Gaby. :( The instructions weren't very concise on that part. Thanks a lot Gaby cause you also confused me!!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3204443645684988672.post-59657995987428340022012-01-10T07:05:17.760-08:002012-01-10T07:05:17.760-08:00well at the beginning i got confused. You see i pl...well at the beginning i got confused. You see i placed a thumb on the bottom, but i placed the index finger of the other hand on top. That messed me up...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3204443645684988672.post-35915702200806193782012-01-09T08:08:33.511-08:002012-01-09T08:08:33.511-08:00Yummm Arige you made me hungry! I want some jajaja...Yummm Arige you made me hungry! I want some jajaja <br />P.S thnks for the recipeAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3204443645684988672.post-40052753742570786242012-01-09T07:17:10.962-08:002012-01-09T07:17:10.962-08:00i like marshmallows. most of the time. yesterday i...i like marshmallows. most of the time. yesterday i was making hot chocolate and i stuck some marshmallows in the pot to boil. turns out that marshmallows boil over the pan and fill the kitchen with smoke when you stick them into boiling water. so i had to make another pot of hot chocolate. in the end, i ended up drinking several hot chocolates throughout the night. it helps on sunday night when Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3204443645684988672.post-70229048801418915372012-01-06T09:29:37.713-08:002012-01-06T09:29:37.713-08:00Your instruction were not that clear to me but af...Your instruction were not that clear to me but after reading it as much as I could understand I could understand your instructions.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3204443645684988672.post-66101939448785012012-01-06T07:55:18.239-08:002012-01-06T07:55:18.239-08:00Those instructions were very clear and concise. I ...Those instructions were very clear and concise. I feel certain that I would have been able to make marshmallow taffy from these instructions.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3204443645684988672.post-53004714103508854762012-01-06T07:50:35.220-08:002012-01-06T07:50:35.220-08:00Good job Amir. I think if I had a marshmallow and ...Good job Amir. I think if I had a marshmallow and followed these instructions, I would probably end up with some taffy. I think that the vocabulary you used for your instructions were a little bit too complex, and one of the main points for technical writing is to be clear. Other than that, you did really good on your technical writing. Congratulations!!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3204443645684988672.post-58299811588894806752012-01-06T07:14:27.862-08:002012-01-06T07:14:27.862-08:00Your instructions were very clear, and probably if...Your instructions were very clear, and probably if I had a marshmallow with me at the moment I would be able to make the taffy. Even though I didn't do this, I think this is a good writing exercise to learn how to communicate with concise language, and not get too complicated so the reader doesn't understand. But one thing I can't stand in instructions on how to do things is when theyAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3204443645684988672.post-42557318380340892192012-01-06T07:12:34.500-08:002012-01-06T07:12:34.500-08:00People pay attention to what I'm asking you fo...People pay attention to what I'm asking you for..... Read the post againAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3204443645684988672.post-51824736541961142322012-01-06T07:08:25.690-08:002012-01-06T07:08:25.690-08:00It was really fun to make a marshmallow taffy but ...It was really fun to make a marshmallow taffy but bad thing was that I had to wash my hands after eating it. However I would never try it in my house because my mom will kick me out if I eat it like that. And by the way the original marshmallow is better than taffyAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3204443645684988672.post-92125937891074548252012-01-06T07:03:55.090-08:002012-01-06T07:03:55.090-08:00haha that is very creative, but personally i do no...haha that is very creative, but personally i do not like marshmallow since i ate one that was literally on fire and burned my mouthAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3204443645684988672.post-28815767318547853492012-01-06T06:39:50.931-08:002012-01-06T06:39:50.931-08:00One easy step to mellow taffy:
Place in microwave ...One easy step to mellow taffy:<br />Place in microwave and melt for 15 seconds.<br />Nice job.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3204443645684988672.post-50571351619635259662012-01-06T06:19:59.687-08:002012-01-06T06:19:59.687-08:00Hahaha it was really difficult to explain how to m...Hahaha it was really difficult to explain how to make marshmallow taffy. It was really fun to make it. But it was too disgusting to eat.. Well that is my opinion but I think many others likes to eat it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com